Fiction: Lost In Time
October 17, 2017
Prologue: Lost in time
A long time ago in the woods sat a little peaceful cottage or so we thought. My name is Sally Jackson, but some people call me Little Sally Jackson. Let me tell you about the day I rewrote time.
I was walking home one day and had this crazy idea to create a time machine. Practically do the impossible. After years of hard work, I did it. So, to test it I went in (not safe). I accidentally typed in the wrong date ,and it brought me to years in the future where they had self driving cars. As I waited for a self driving Taxi someone bumped into me and he said “my apologies.” “its okay.” I replied. He soon spoke ” this is probably awkward but I have this strange sensation that I know you.” I thought I have this felling too though i did not want to admit it to him. I scanned my memories as he scanned his.
Chapter 1: Pulsing Heart
I was scared of what he would say next, for I felt as if i should hug him. I did not hug him because it felt wrong. A young lady about my height with long blond hair came and embraced him. I felt a twinge of Jealousy in my stomach. I felt as if I should protect him from her.
Elena Flessas • Oct 25, 2017 at 12:53 pm
Oh! I forgot. I really liked the part where they bumped into each other. it gives a real plot twist.
Elena Flessas • Oct 25, 2017 at 12:49 pm
Oh my god I really love your writing it’s so unique!!! I write stories to and I see very few people with as good a talent as yours. Please continue writing I cannot wait to read more!