Doie Jr. High 7th Grade Boys Basketball’s First Game
January 30, 2018
As the 7th grade basketball boys walk in the crowd roars with excitement. Their first game was December 21st, 2017, the last week of school ‘till the break. Everybody is cheering and clapping as the boys take on the court to warm up. You hear the thump on the floor as the boys dribble the balls and see the sweat as it runs down their face. The competitiveness was threw the roof.
“When we lose I feel disappointed” said Donte Payton, center for A team.The first game for A team was close, but sadly they lost.
On the other hand B team scored and took a won and are also undefeated right now. “When we win we just feel normal because we know we’re gonna win” said Austin Crowe, point guard for B team.
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Really great article! I really liked the vocabulary and the different wording you used. I also like the topic as we get know the seventh graders more.
I love the imagery you used in this. It’s almost like I was there, and good job keeping it short and simple.
Good job describing and using imagery.
I love that this is short and to the point. No wasted time in other things
This article is pretty good! I like how it is short and to the point.
I like how you expressed your thought and made people think that they were there
I really like the imagery you used. It made me feel like I had the experience myself, along with the crowd. That seemed like a very amazing experience, i wish i could have enjoyed. The article is very good and to the point.
NICE
i like how it is straight to the poimt and easy to read. I also like how it is about basketball.
Great article, I liked the imagery.
i love this article!! its very straight to the point. keep up the good work.